FOR AN HOUR MORE

RONDELET

For an hour more

For an hour more

Would I my soul to you release,

For an hour more,

Would I again open your door

And my hand on yours wish you peace,

So the hurt between us may cease,

For an hour more.

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10 thoughts on “FOR AN HOUR MORE

  1. I love this! Actually, I just uploaded a ‘Rondelet’ of my own onto my blog. It’s linked below. I’d love it if you would read over it and leave me some tips on how to improve. With your incredible writing technique, I’m sure I can learn a lot from you. Thanks!
https://poeticaparadisum.wordpress.com

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      1. Have you tried writing free verse? Some folk like strict form, it can be a means to focus, to channel. I see it as almost ‘puzzle poetry’ and it can push you into word choices, to facilitate rhyme & rhythm, that may not be the best. My personal view is that it is more akin to academia than art. I’ve had a quick look and you’ve definitely got talent, I think with free verse you’d soar !

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