Same subject different style and feel



“So stalks the silent pad of the bold first light,

it’s prey the dark, that must die or take flight,

soon there will be only a shadow left to sight

then finally break of day and the end of night”.


5 thoughts on “AUBADE

    1. I love the simplicity of this one and I’m trying with something similar to get to a loose English haiku sort of vibe. By that I mean a simple 4/6 line single verse with layers of meaning, no syllable count or rhyme scheme

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      1. Oh no! Ha! That is funny. You’re a busy man. Surely they’d understand you can’t devote all your time to Facebook. Farcebook! That’s great and so accurate! I’ve called it Vaguebook before. People and their cryptic messages, but then of course you get the ones who overshare, too. I’d say Farcebook is very fitting. I like that.

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